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    dots Submission Name: I'm Sorrydots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    21/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/252/162
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI'm Sorrydots
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    I'm sorry
    So sorry for hte all the times I've lied to you
    For all the excuses that I've made to cover my lies

    I'm sorry
    Sorry for all the times that you had to lie
    When I became lost in my own world and forgot everything and everyone else

    I'm sorry
    So sorry for the times I disappeared for days on end
    Without letting you or anyone else know where I was going

    I'm sorry
    Sorry for not caring at all about what this was doing to you
    For not seeing what I was doing to our realionship

    I'm sorry
    Because now that I can finally see
    The only thing I can say is

    I'm sorry




    Submitted on 2008-10-28 21:11:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow you must be really sorry i feel the pain in this the hurt you might have felt good job
    | Posted on 2009-02-24 00:00:00 | by easily_ammused | [ Reply to This ]


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