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    dots Submission Name: Awsome Haydots
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    Author: TheCure91
    ASL Info:    100/assexual/in your but
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 5/5/8
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 618
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 340



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    dotsAwsome Haydots
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    i have a friend named haely
    she is verry crazy

    she hardly ever talks
    and she likes to stalk
    me daily

    i met her in math
    throwing away something in the trash

    i said "hey haely"
    she said "boy your crazy!!"


    j.j.plantz




    Submitted on 2008-10-30 21:14:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol this is the one you gave me! and I do not stalk you!
    ...daily
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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