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roller coaster ride


Author: theman
ASL Info:    21/m/mn
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Words: 155
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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trying to finish this poem 2nd draft, please commemt any thing would help


roller coaster ride



one thousand lines
one thousand rhymes
i let my ink bleed from my pen
to show you whats on my mind.

heart racing, pulse rising, suffacting
cardiac arrest
it's emergency
can't you see
baby you are my i.v.

Up and down
round and round
side to side
emotional roller coaster we ride
disagreements, broken promises, arguing
but as the sun sets,the stars and the moon meet
I can't live without you
when you are my life line.

one in a million
something is not right
for every other guy to pass you bye.
on bending knee
staring up at my beautiful Queen
leaving a love not ever felt
going though my body
like a i.v.

i dont ever wanna to stop loving you girl
so dont stop being my world
love me, hold me, hear me
be there because i need a my I.V.




Submitted on 2008-10-31 01:26:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this piece alot.
You've definately gotten your point accross..
The diction is great, and states the obvious connection between you and this girl..
| Posted on 2008-11-08 00:00:00 | by danni_amazing | [ Reply to This ]


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