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    dots Submission Name: When Flirting Just Isn't Enoughdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 696
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 451



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    dotsWhen Flirting Just Isn't Enoughdots
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    I penned this note
    to rock the vote
    (do rocks emote?)

    but

    my sorry lot
    was soon forgot
    as shifting plots

    left me in debt
    and soaked in sweat
    (this blue, that red)

    so what's the diff?
    young stiff? old stiff?
    same lies, new lips

    conquistadors
    or new age whores
    I could care less - see ya in four




    Submitted on 2008-10-31 18:08:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Much truth spoken here.

    | Posted on 2008-11-07 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]
      So I have read this a couple of times...

    I am thinking about the SNL spoofs that were on last night. snort.

    Sigh. I am not voting. I didn't even registar.
    And here I be, indifferent as all hell. I have no faith in the process. It's rigged.
    I mean why is it all R and D... doesn't anyone else have some new ideas? I am pretty moderate, but I hold no allegience to a particular party and I am really tired of the same old. Regardless of who wins today, I just am all outta hope about it all. Which is sad, because I love my country. I just have become cynical and politics is all about dick blowing. Ya know? Ugh.
    | Posted on 2008-11-04 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      Very pointed and truly said.
    We are just some pawns,
    paid with penny coins
    to ache our loins.

    Scandals, corruptions
    and our consumtions
    are true presumtions .

    How the dollar goes
    no one ever knows ,
    just taxes up nose.
    | Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Haven't read realpoet's post yet. But let me deal with this one first.

    I find it interesting how you can make slurping sounds seem mature just by knowing when and where it should be placed. That, I think, has always been the root of your poetic prowess.

    And how come I have yet to hear of a voting public that doesn't say this:

    so what's the diff?
    young stiff? old stiff?
    same lies, new lips.


    Probably because I'm young. But shouldn't that be the other way around?

    But ofcourse...

    conquistadors
    or new age whores
    I could care less - see ya in four



    I always enjoy reading your work, Bill. Always carefree but never careless.
    | Posted on 2008-11-01 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]
      Interestingly put. Cool comeback (or addition) to realpoets poem.

    What's the diff?
    Well, we've got one that wants to be King of the World (one world government?). I think I'll take the 'old stiff' over that.
    | Posted on 2008-10-31 00:00:00 | by TamarRoze | [ Reply to This ]


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