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    dots Submission Name: Season A Light ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 734
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 360



    Description:
       A rainy day on All Hallows Eve! What a Treat nature provides!

    lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~


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    dotsSeason A Light ~*~dots
    -------------------------------------------


    White
    Light

    Clouds
    Comfort
    Golden
    Foliage
    Fall
    A glow

    Rain
    Dances
    D
    O
    W
    N

    Wind
    Stirring
    Trees


    Fluttering
    Leaves
    Long
    For
    Comfort

    A ground
    Alive ~ ~ ~




    Submitted on 2008-10-31 20:42:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      All the beauty of the day flows down your lines, Tif. Lovely! Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the fall and I think it is the best season of the year here in Dallas. Thanks for this verse reminding us of rainy fall days!
    | Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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