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    dots Submission Name: Just too Drunk to Typedots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 238
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    dotsJust too Drunk to Typedots

    Just too Drunk to Type

    It's two thirty in the morning
    and what the hell am I doing here
    punching keys and gawping between white spaces
    and waiting for the next blank bit of calligraphy

    yup, I've been drinking
    yet again
    with the same old excuse of any excuse for a party
    this time it was Halloween
    and I hallowed and weened my self into this state

    buggered if I can find a better excuse
    and thank god for sellp chcek

    but why am I here
    I can barely focus through the beer
    and I guess this equates my sad singularity
    nothing to do
    but fall asleep
    or sit here and face the empty

    I should go to bed
    or smoke one last cigarette
    and conj our something different
    from this swimming vodka
    but instead.......................

    I find myself here
    why am I here
    I can just about focus on a word
    let alone this keyboard

    and I vanished fir a moment
    in a tiny spinet of sleep
    where my drunken thoughts went whirring
    through the blanket through which I peep
    I have even forgotten the contents of these lines
    I have sauntered into a day dream
    that was never mine

    and I have lost every thread of thought
    that threading words can define

    Too drunk to pay attention
    to my own confession

    I really have to leave this..............t

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      Awesome post. Were you really drunk? Help me out here, normally I can guess if someone's a guy or a girl by their works, and I'm right most of the time. But with you I'm having great difficulty
    | Posted on 2008-11-06 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a cool writting.
    describe the drinking maybe that will interest others, maybe put it in the writting..

    But other than that i like it
    | Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by TalentedChild | [ Reply to This ]

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