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    dots Submission Name: I never understood youdots
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    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 120/198/62
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI never understood youdots
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    I guess I never understood
    I could never comprehend
    Not until there I stood
    the kind of dad that you have been.

    It wasn't till my own kids came
    I was blind for all these years.
    I know now its cause of you
    that I have grown up with out fear.

    I never understood the pride
    and dissappointment I have caused.
    I could never understand
    when you would answer " just because"

    Now I live with just one fear.
    what if I can not live to.
    the image I have of a dad
    a bar that was set high by you.

    I love you dad and now I know
    as I sit here far away.
    that its because of you and mom
    that I'm the man I am today.

    I love you both. and thank you.




    Submitted on 2008-11-01 02:35:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       I like the way you have shown gratitude towards your parents. Parents are the foundation of our lives. They are like God. Your parents must be very proud of you and your ditty.
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      And acknowldging what we have means changing that patern of life to our children.
    I just wanted to thank you for this poem, like any painting it should reflect in the reaction of reaction of life and what you do with it.



    Your poem was awsome!!!!

    Your friend T.REDD
    | Posted on 2008-11-01 00:00:00 | by T.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      An appreciation forum to your parents.
    Is what i derive from a internal delayed reality.
    As learning spounges of adolences, we at times might dismiss the foundation of family
    responsiblity and later in life gain to appreciate the fundementals and the dissapointments in our own reactions.
    As a father of triplets i can highly advocate that mistakes can be corrected by your future offspring, although i had no father only biologicaly, and my mother was a stranger and a abuser. . . . . . reguadless i was focus on something brighter and contenscious.
    I forgave my mother for the hardships and brutal scars that she has inflicted in my soul,
    many years ago.
    Didn 'nt mean to get personal but life is short,
    and ecknowlegeding


    | Posted on 2008-11-01 00:00:00 | by T.Redd | [ Reply to This ]


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