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    Author: TheCure91
    ASL Info:    100/assexual/in your but
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 5/5/8
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 579
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 493



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       man i was so angry when i wrote this


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    Women are gettingbeat in thr streats
    men are being reddemed
    People in foreign lands are not being redeemed

    a poor man pleads for mercy
    The rich man answers harshly

    a mans own wickedness ruins his life
    yet his heart rages against his own strife

    a false partner will not go un punished
    and he who pours out lies will be fillid with anguish!!!!

    AAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!


    j.j.plantz.




    Submitted on 2008-11-01 15:29:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was beautiful! and so true. glad someone else sees it the way I do. lol
    Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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