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Adventure of a Lifetime


Author: Roula
ASL Info:    18/female
Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46 /64 /45
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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Adventure of a Lifetime



An explorer in a forbidden underground jungle,
A maze of dangers left and right.
I listened to the dim voices,
And the creaking in the trees that surrounded me.

On a mission to get to where there was comfort-
Dee was there, smiling at me;
Her smile could light up all the rooms
I stoped to linger, and then I smiled back at her,
My offering of love.

A smile turned to laughter,
And laughter turned to tears.

The lines of reality are blurred when you’re a child
And you forget that the underground jungle is a table.
Ouch.





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