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    dots Submission Name: fall foreverdots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    26/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 63/298/259
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    dotsfall foreverdots
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    its all fake to me
    when it all ends its just you and me
    standing on the edge
    lets leave this life behind
    at the end we will go hand in hand

    join me on the edge
    join me in death
    all this means nothing
    lets end this now
    falling forever together

    do we stand or fall
    do we jump or step back
    do we swim or drown
    do we live or die
    in the end nothing matters

    join me on the edge
    join me in death
    all this means nothing
    lets end this now
    falling forever together

    join me on the edge
    join me at the end of all things
    lets fall together
    lets let go and fall forever
    lets leave this life behind

    lets end this now
    we will fall forever together




    Submitted on 2008-11-02 13:43:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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