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    dots Submission Name: Am I Just Like You?dots
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    Author: TheCure91
    ASL Info:    100/assexual/in your but
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 5/5/8
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 758
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 465



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    dotsAm I Just Like You?dots
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    am i just like you
    feeling so untrue

    everything that you do!
    is a shitty shade of blue!

    you are reeling
    on the floor screaming!!

    screaming out
    trying to shout

    running out and about
    will you ever try to doubt

    the will inside
    someting you can finaly confide

    am i just like you
    with nothing to DO!!!

    .j.j.plantz




    Submitted on 2008-11-02 14:18:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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