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    dots Submission Name: The Language of Your Soul is Written on Your Lipsdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsThe Language of Your Soul is Written on Your Lipsdots
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    The Language of Your Soul
    is Written on Your Lips

    Heat nor sweat could contain
    these lips hungering
    for the dialect of a soul
    written passion
    formed syllables of desire
    round breath and skin
    arching pressing
    to fit the puzzle of bodies
    where each sensation curves
    loosening
    arching

    Touch could not define
    though by design caressed
    deep inside
    each spontaneous kiss
    separated and joined with softness
    wet
    wanting revealed secret
    given and taken
    between eyes arms breasts and legs

    Tracing each scythe of beauty
    voicing a moment composed
    in eternity
    its mantle parted and penetrated
    lifting by strength and tenderness
    lovers exposed in fullness

    Ardour nor sex could restrain
    a kisses need for food
    its sustenance the symphony of loves deliverance
    composing sensuality
    carving and craving the syllabus of rapture
    within panting flesh
    spanning such urgent wanting
    completing mystery
    where singly and separately excitement reaches out
    to another person

    Lays subdued in languid drifting
    a moment to lift from sleeping
    the heat and sweat which could not contain
    lips still longing
    for the language of your soul




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      Delicious. Ecstatic. Euphoric. Sexy. Great use of words. Great intensity. Excellent emotion.
    | Posted on 2008-11-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      OKAY I WAS JUST BLOWN AWAY!!!!!! GREAT POST!!!!!! I WISH THERE WAS MORE FOR ME TO SAY BUT THIS IS JUST SIMPLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

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    | Posted on 2008-11-04 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]
      Sensual. That pretty much sums it up. Keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]


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