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Learn to Use Your Feet

Author: Katrinagolden
ASL Info:    27/F/chicago
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a little crazy i know but tell me your interpreations if any

Learn to Use Your Feet

Clip the wings of yesterday
And learn to use your feet

Walk around, explore the world
And let yourself wander around

There are no wrong turns
And each path leads onward

Learn to use your feet
Even if you'll tend to fall

Everytime you fall
Make sure to watch your bum

Nothing can ever stop you
Nothing can ever go wrong
Just make sure to learn how to use your feet

Walk around, explore the world
And I'm sure you'll find what you seek

Just remember to learn how to use your feet

Submitted on 2008-11-03 19:43:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I aprrcoate that while flying towards you dreams it cliché you invite us to walk toward them. like old people on rollerblades you fall on your bum but continue on. = ]
| Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
  A message that seems to be somewhat rare but much needed today.
| Posted on 2008-11-06 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]

I liked the idea of the wings being clipped and using your feet instead.....We hear so many methaphors to fly away with your it's refreshing to hear something different...

In terms of the writing itself, I thought you wanted to be motivational and though it does lean towards that direction, the wording is kinda repetitive so it looses its meaning along the way.

It's not crazy at all....It's like a message to stop thinking of the sky and face the fact that you're not gonna grow wings no matter how hard you wish for it....So loved the idea completely.

Hope you're having a good day....

Take care....

| Posted on 2008-11-05 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]
golden katrina.

sounds strange to me.
I think it should be motivating but you say im losing beautiful memories, there are no wrong turns but i'll fall, falling equals not walking and im stopping.
thus: good poem.
bout life n stuff i guess.
of course its a little crazy.
i constantly think: do you know how to use your feet? and if you do, are you sure you're doin it the right way?
my mother told me that she had seen almost everything, that she had almost experienced everything.
i wondered if she was dead already.
get it?

portraits of tracy,

| Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by Jimi James | [ Reply to This ]

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