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Submission Name:
Faking Apathy
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Author:
Anneboleyn707
ASL Info:
18/Female/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:
3.96 - 44/84/67
Words:
156
Class/Type:
Poetry/Broken
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Faking Apathy
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I let you
So you pushed me down
Onto the floor
Lower than I thought
I'd be
What did I want to prove?
That I was stronger than you
A rock
Same kind of heart
That you can't breach
Well, not that easy
So I let you
Now I'm wandering around
A child in this dark alley way
So far from the light
That I thought would be here
Quickly cherished
Just as quickly
Faking apathy
And thrown away
Why'd I let you?
As if I didn't know
As if I could bottle my pain like that pill
So being used couldn't hurt me
And no one's eyes really see me
As if no one hurts me
As if nothing will
Submitted on 2008-11-04 00:58:33
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This deftly tells the tale of how some consequenses surprise us by how different they are as compared to what we thought they would be!
This aptly adresses a difficult subject with drama and feeling! There are many out there that will relate to this, and which this will help!
| Posted on 2008-11-13 00:00:00 | by
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This reminds me of plety of times I felt like I had to prove something slthough I knew I wasn't proving anything I orginally wanted to...great job
| Posted on 2008-11-05 00:00:00 | by
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