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Author:	Anneboleyn707
ASL Info:	18/Female/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:	3.96 - 44/84/67
Words:	156

Class/Type:	Poetry/Broken
Total Views:	762
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Faking Apathy dots

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I let you

So you pushed me down

Onto the floor

Lower than I thought

I'd be

What did I want to prove?

That I was stronger than you

A rock

Same kind of heart

That you can't breach

Well, not that easy

So I let you

Now I'm wandering around

A child in this dark alley way

So far from the light

That I thought would be here

Quickly cherished

Just as quickly

Faking apathy

And thrown away

Why'd I let you?

As if I didn't know

As if I could bottle my pain like that pill

So being used couldn't hurt me

And no one's eyes really see me

As if no one hurts me

As if nothing will

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This deftly tells the tale of how some consequenses surprise us by how different they are as compared to what we thought they would be!

This aptly adresses a difficult subject with drama and feeling! There are many out there that will relate to this, and which this will help!
| Posted on 2008-11-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
This reminds me of plety of times I felt like I had to prove something slthough I knew I wasn't proving anything I orginally wanted to...great job
| Posted on 2008-11-05 00:00:00 | by KiHoodie | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.