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    dots Submission Name: Fantastic Fidelitydots
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    Author: Anneboleyn707
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 44/84/67
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 844
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    Hiding; we're slowly dying
    So you're pushed into the background
    Forced into the corner
    And we won't stand hand in hand
    As their comically inquisitive eyes
    Make use of your obscene demise
    And follow my heart's crooked trail
    I'm sure

    It won't

    Lead back to you

    Oh, you're most prominent, but stashed away...a momento
    ...I can't commemorate
    Kept safe behind a solid gate of my trivial niceties
    Please god you don't unveil the truth
    That's tarnished our recovery

    And yes, you mean the world to me
    But to the world your just a joke
    Or you're just the song I can't sing aloud
    Or the passion I won't provoke

    And blindfolded as I hold you
    Better kept against this silent beat
    My fingers shake
    My mouth goes dry
    For this that sees without ability
    My surreptitious passion



    And, what else?

    My Fantastic Fidelity





    Submitted on 2008-11-04 01:04:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is nice. I don't know why it didn't get any comments. Maybe because it's too personal almost like a letter to someone. But I like it anyway. The only thing I would change is the word momento. I think you mean memento. Both words may be used, I think, but to me momento doesn't seem right in this context.
    | Posted on 2012-10-10 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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