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A beautiful tower covered in moss, solitary in serenity scrutinizing the stillness of cedar-lake green complemented by blossoms of winter rose velvet - icy to the touch - until, the Golden Sun's rays crawl through to the moss landing and caress the calmness unveiling Life. |
Yeah the poem is ok. There are some errors though, in lines 5, 6 and 8 some symbols are showing, like the euro sign and a Romanian letter as well. You should edit it a bit.| Posted on 2008-11-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ] | I love poems about nature and the outdoors, and this was lovely! Excellent word pictures here, and a delightful mood and feeling incorporated in the poem. | | Posted on 2008-11-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] | |