Lonely Pine -------------------------------------------
A beautiful tower covered in moss,
solitary in serenity
scrutinizing the stillness of cedar-lake green
complemented by blossoms
of winter rose velvet -
icy to the touch -
until,
the Golden Sun's rays crawl through
to the moss landing and caress the calmness
unveiling Life.
Yeah the poem is ok. There are some errors though, in lines 5, 6 and 8 some symbols are showing, like the euro sign and a Romanian letter as well. You should edit it a bit.
I love poems about nature and the outdoors, and this was lovely! Excellent word pictures here, and a delightful mood and feeling incorporated in the poem.
Submission Name: Lonely Pine
