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    dots Submission Name: The Eternal Witnessdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots The Eternal Witnessdots
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    The Eternal Witness

    I once lived in the heart of a sun
    dust and body
    now I am a leaf

    The sea of creation surrounds me
    I move fluid eternal
    in eternity
    the witness
    the child
    the eye of the ever present
    > NOW <
    oscillating in thought
    betwixt the material and the spiritual
    I am a leaf on a tree

    The pillar of heaven I descend
    though I am not bound by stone
    the breath of life
    as I play
    with light and clay
    dust and body

    All that cannot be named
    I am
    all by virtue defined
    they veil and reveal the subtlety’s
    the mysteries
    a plain
    a facet surface catching
    reflecting
    but a part

    BEHOLD !

    I am the diamond
    the translucent expression
    of all that lays within

    Many names I have born
    not the least of them
    your own
    for I am the face within the face
    that looks out upon this world

    I once lived in the heart of a sun
    dust and body
    now
    I am a tree.











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