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    dots Submission Name: Ipsofacto of { Feardots
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    dotsIpsofacto of { Feardots
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    Ipsofacto of { Fear

    Call yourself Christian
    Call yourself Human
    Call yourself Mohammedans

    Say you are Sufi
    Say you are Wicca
    Say you are Krishna Marti

    Be nailed to suffering
    The message of Buddhism
    Find eternity in the Dao

    Live for the moment
    Escape in doctrine
    Define yourself by dogma

    Have faith in a word
    Faith in “I AM ”
    Faith in the Vibration “AUM ”

    Look to heaven
    Look to hell
    Look to the bottom of a wishing well

    Believe in Nothing
    Believe in Everything
    Believe in Now

    Be channelled by writing
    And crystal healing
    Find power by lay line divining

    Pray to God
    Pray to Christ
    Pray to Lucifer

    Read the Tarot
    Read the I Ching
    Read the “Seven rings of Bushido”

    Draw on the eclectic
    Draw on the Mystic
    Draw on Theology

    Think of death
    Think of life
    Think of death

    See this Planet
    See the Stars
    See billions of Galaxies

    Tiny Earth
    Tiny mind
    Tiny worlds

    Explain a smile
    Explain a tear
    Explain all this with some originality

    Why of life
    Why of death
    Why are we here

    Or
    Ipsofacto of fear

















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      I really liked this. One of the main reason was b/c you touched on a wide range of beliefs, and didn't focus on just Christianity, Buddhism or the dominant belief systems. And then to reduce them all to simple ways of dealing with this world-wide common emotion of fear, it's really interesting. And I laso like the fact that here are all of these beliefs that have cuased so much separation and battles and wars between people, and yet here they are all unified; they all arise out of one thing: fear!

    Bravo!
    | Posted on 2008-11-09 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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