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    dots Submission Name: I am Lostdots

    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 41/64/75
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Prose/
    Total Views: 447
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1425

       Heres something stupid i did, not sure if its a poem, or prose...or anything much...

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    dotsI am Lostdots

    I am lost...
    The winds are strong...
    Amongst the skies, never ending...
    Seeping blood... taking away... all that is mine...
    Not knowing what to say
    To this driving force
    That is creeping ever so closely...
    To eat away
    At my very soul...
    The dissipating fringes
    That wants to end
    My desperate search
    Desperate because...
    I have no known idea of what I am looking for...
    How can something be
    Known when you have no known idea
    Of that entity yourself?
    How can his world be shaped when all words dissipate
    How can I let my soul free
    When it is chained down by,
    Anchors as vast as the ocean?
    Why can I not learn to love?
    Why do I always let it slip by?
    Why will I not grasp it firmly?
    And take a hold of it?
    Why do I watch it flutter by like the dandelion seeds blown away by the wind?
    Why can I not take a hold of the soul I am intrigued by the most?
    Why do I show motion for something I am afraid to carry on?
    Am I afraid to break that soul that is bound to me in some perplexed way, because of my actions?
    Why do I continue on when I know the ending will not be pleasant?
    When I know my future will not allow me to keep it intact?
    When I have crossed the ocean...
    When he has stayed ashore...

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      I liked the start but you deviated a lot and I got a little confused. It was like there was two different parts separate from each other.
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by ChildInTime | [ Reply to This ]

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