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    dots Submission Name: Apple Treesdots
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    Author: NovemberInferno
    ASL Info:    18/F/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    5.67 - 3/4/3
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 77
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1380



    Description:
       This turned out to be something completely different from what I'd intended. It's about apple trees and seeds growing into apples...among many other things. I'd like to hear your interpretations.


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    dotsApple Treesdots
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    two naked apple trees
    spindly branches stretched out
    dismantled by December's sweet breathe-
    Morpheus' laced-needle wound through
    welcoming veins

    timeless seamless voiceless
    threads
    pinched by the scarred fingertips
    of Winter's whispering mistress
    woven through the needle
    pierced through the heart
    of the apple trees

    shaking branches, trembling hands
    seizures in a carousal
    pulled round and round
    by the unraveling thread of a
    velveteen horse

    the lie, the fantasy, the apple trees
    reality no longer real
    during Jack Frost's reign
    nothing to feel
    but freezing

    Christ's star came
    warming up the children-
    the unborn children
    and hollow faces sprouted flowers
    awaking from their dazed eyes and blanketed dreams

    and the sated seedlings grew into apples
    weighing down the branches
    until they kissed the ground
    and their lips were frozen
    untouched by the warm fingers
    of the picker
    of the apple trees

    instead the children
    fell
    dead
    ingested by worms-
    decomposing worms
    returning to the cycle
    of untended slumber





    Submitted on 2008-11-09 07:15:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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