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    dots Submission Name: If I Gavedots
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    Author: hardysgirl
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 0/2/4
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 747
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 430



    Description:
       this poem is about love. short but it says alot of how i feel.


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    dotsIf I Gavedots
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    If i gave you my heart would you keep it safe or would you let it fend on its own?
    If i gave you my love would you keep it alive or let it die?
    If i gave you my sole would you keep it sane or would you let it go insaine?
    If i gave you me would you keep me or would you not care what happend to me?

    poem by- Hardysgirl




    Submitted on 2008-11-09 17:06:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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