Trades made for the benifit
characterized by what we want
a train rattles on and claims the forward direction
mills and factories produce
and take a drag
in your face and the faces of your fathers
It reads to me like it was written for the express purpose of alluding to that series.
Other than that, I get the idea of making choices against things that we want and how it all is like someone blowing smoke in your face. Insulting. Offense, thus title.
I don't find it interesting. I would remove the most obvious allusion to The Dark Tower, the last line can work just as easily if it were, "in your face".
The train works, I get the allusion, but even without the allusion it holds. You have used trains as a metaphor in a few (at least one) of your other pieces. Have you considered trying to weave all the pieces together since they all have similar imagery and metaphor?
I feel like I'm just reading a rehash/summary of some of your longer and more interesting pieces.