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    dots Submission Name: ALL Raysdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 167



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       With much love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~


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    dotsALL Raysdots
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    Ray of Son
    Ray of Sun
    Shining Lights
    Springs Forth

    Life
    Enlightenment
    BEINg

    Color
    Expanding ~*~




    Submitted on 2008-11-09 23:55:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like your use of subliminal messages in your poems via capital letters. They pull me inwards.

    Love
    Kate
    | Posted on 2008-12-15 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      In all forms, rays are glorious! Peace and love to you and yours. Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      And let the Sun keep on shining! Thanks for the encouraging, bright sunny verse, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-11-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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