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    dots Submission Name: ALL Raysdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 559
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       With much love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~

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    dotsALL Raysdots

    Ray of Son
    Ray of Sun
    Shining Lights
    Springs Forth


    Expanding ~*~

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      I like your use of subliminal messages in your poems via capital letters. They pull me inwards.

    | Posted on 2008-12-15 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      In all forms, rays are glorious! Peace and love to you and yours. Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      And let the Sun keep on shining! Thanks for the encouraging, bright sunny verse, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-11-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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