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Author:	KarloZ
ASL Info:	21/male/california
Elite Ratio:	2.38 - 5/5/18
Words:	79

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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'Nother of my journals.

untitled dots

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And now I just don't know.

The uncertainty on which I'd grown to depend is begging to take effect.

Should I stay or should I go?

The me and the rest; the smile, the pain; the work, the life; I have to, I dont.

I don't know.

It boils down to this:

To choose between

Do I lie or do I hurt?

For now I lie, tomorrow I choose.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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