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Author: KarloZ
ASL Info:    21/male/california
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'Nother of my journals.


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And now I just don't know.

The uncertainty on which I'd grown to depend is begging to take effect.

Should I stay or should I go?

The me and the rest; the smile, the pain; the work, the life; I have to, I dont.

I don't know.

It boils down to this:

To choose between


Do I lie or do I hurt?


For now I lie, tomorrow I choose.




Submitted on 2008-11-11 18:37:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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