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Author: KarloZ ASL Info:    21/male/california Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 5 /5 /18 Words: 79

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And now I just don't know. The uncertainty on which I'd grown to depend is begging to take effect. Should I stay or should I go? The me and the rest; the smile, the pain; the work, the life; I have to, I dont. I don't know. It boils down to this: To choose between Do I lie or do I hurt? For now I lie, tomorrow I choose.

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