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Survive


Author: vampirefreak69
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Survive


Three days in
A month goes passing by
The needles sinking in
But all for you, I try

Holding on
With every breath
Now I see, you're not falling
I won't fall victim to death(Not yet)

So dance behind me
Don't skip a word
And when I speak
Tell me if I'm absurd

Cause I'm standing right beside you
Just one thousand miles away
And your voice rings on so calmly
Telling me you'll always stay

Yesterday is gone
And today, for you , I'll survive




Submitted on 2008-11-12 05:56:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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