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Author: vampirefreak69
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Words: 135
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Chilling whispers screaming down the halls
Murderous screams whisper in my ears
I can smell my heart beating.

I felt the words come to me
I was no target they wanted
For their words to stab, they needed.

I was no sharp blade
Just more blunt than a nail
I couldn’t kill inside to save my soul
No desire is found in me to fetch others from despair.

Outside of me they rip
Tasting the rose petals
In disgusting ecstasy.

I envy their strength
Ripping stems and in triumph.

I lean into their lives
To find the source of power
But my heart is so weak
As long as its beating aroma
Fills the air

The whispers screaming
The screams whispering
I wake up to my own
White noise

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