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    dots Submission Name: "Please don't read"dots

    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
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    I keep him chained to a volcano of emotion.
    never letting him out for fear of what he might do. no physical harm does he ever cause just the harm of fucking everything up!
    I waundered how long it would take for him to rear his ugly head.It took longer than expected. I was very suprised at her reaction.
    No hate no anger, nothing but loving, tender understanding. It could be seen as a self- sabotage tactic. Iknow all to well the tricks he plays that is why I keep him locked up.
    Evey time I get what I want, he finds a way, the easiest way I might add to fuck eveything up beyond all recognition. all she said as she stood there freaking out at my obvious discontent was " What do you want me to do, what can I say to make it better?"
    we discussed the suject at hand and she said simply," I won't do it any more i promise," and that was that. Even though I was insantly releaved at the selflessness of her simple act I made her understand by reitterating the promises she had made not because I did not trust her or believe the words she spoke but only to let her know how important this was to me. All she could say is, " It is my job to make you happy and you being happy makes me happy." What a feeling of total and complete love I feel for her. Those profound words have never passed the lips of anyone towards me before much less even crossed the minds of them in reference of me. She says that is in the job desciption of my girlfriend and if she didn't do her job she might get fired. Even though it was only a joke, my heart dropped in that moment, that she could have thought such a thing and even though i didn't say it aloud I wanted to yell out "Never in all my lives past, present, nor future, would that EVER happen."
    I only hope that I can return this kind of selfless understanding if and when the time comes that she asks for something. It should not be a problem as my love for her already overcomes ALL expectations and hopes I have ever known or had. I WILL KEEP THE SAGITTARIUS CHAINED TO THE VOLCANO AND I WILL LET YOU HOLD THE KEY. I am so so sorry for my jealous and possesive streaks hunny. I love you then, now, and eternally.
    Always yours... A SAGITTARIUS REVEALED...

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      Again, My love, a beautiful Piece.

    | Posted on 2008-11-12 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]

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