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Submission Name:
yay!
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Author:
cha
Elite Ratio:
2.3 - 37/28/31
Words:
31
Class/Type:
Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:
887
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Description:
yay!
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Sanity overrated
Overused
Medicated
Emotions taken
Used
Abused
Crying endlessly
Alone
Away
Depression growing
Staying
Lasting
Cutting worse
Deeper
Bloodier
Overdoses terrible
Hospitals
Doctors
Never-ending cycle
Thinking
Bad Thoughts
Submitted on 2008-11-12 16:38:17
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Wow! No its not really a yey piece! but it is still a good poem! I loved it! Great Write
| Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by
Demon__666
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this doesn't feel like a 'yay!' piece.
it also doesn't feel like poetry.
actually, i'm pretty sure it's just a laundry list.
| Posted on 2008-11-14 00:00:00 | by
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