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    dots Submission Name: yay!dots
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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 887
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsyay!dots
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    Sanity overrated
    Overused
    Medicated
    Emotions taken
    Used
    Abused
    Crying endlessly
    Alone
    Away
    Depression growing
    Staying
    Lasting
    Cutting worse
    Deeper
    Bloodier
    Overdoses terrible
    Hospitals
    Doctors
    Never-ending cycle
    Thinking
    Bad Thoughts




    Submitted on 2008-11-12 16:38:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Wow! No its not really a yey piece! but it is still a good poem! I loved it! Great Write
    | Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      this doesn't feel like a 'yay!' piece.

    it also doesn't feel like poetry.




    actually, i'm pretty sure it's just a laundry list.
    | Posted on 2008-11-14 00:00:00 | by trouble | [ Reply to This ]


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