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    dots Submission Name: If she really loves medots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 112/217/289
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 807
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 783



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       For my girlfriend, because i love her


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    dotsIf she really loves medots
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    If she really loves me
    As much as I love her
    Than every second that we are apart
    The ache inside grows larger
    But I cannot stand to watch her hurt
    So maybe,
    Just maybe it would be better
    If she didn't love me
    And she didn't hurt
    Not anymore
    If it wasn't for me she wouldn't hurt
    But I love her
    I will always love her
    And every second
    That we are apart
    The ache inside grows larger
    But I cannot stand to live without her
    Never
    Not even for a second
    Do I believe
    That a life without her
    Even if it had no pain
    Could ever be better
    Than this life we share
    Because I love her
    And she loves me




    Submitted on 2008-11-12 20:46:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As Shakespear wrote "It's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all" or something similar. The last few lines made me think of that. It is a certainly more interesting life to have crazy ups and downs than to coast along and not feeling anything that makes you a little crazy from time to time.

    The part about blaming yourself for her hurting, I'm sure it's preferable than having to watch someone else do the hurting. At least this way you have more control over easing any hurt.

    Not really decided if I like this piece or not but I like the sentiments expressed. Take care, chilli.
    | Posted on 2008-11-16 00:00:00 | by chilliboy | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, honey that was really sweet and beautiful. I do love you, and you are worth every minute of my time...
    But yeah..on a 'professional' note I thought it was nicely structered...and..amazing! love you...
    | Posted on 2008-11-12 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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