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    dots Submission Name: Not Youdots
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    Author: ThisIsReal
    ASL Info:    22-M-Lost
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 182/194/88
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1041



    Description:
       not new, originating from april of 2007, recently resurfaced in a shoebox.


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    dotsNot Youdots
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    Every minute
    I spend on this earth,
    Every hour that passes on
    Every day that I almost missed
    I think of you

    With every breath I take,
    filling my lungs,
    surrounding my being,
    even on a forgotten wind,
    I still catch your perfume

    Everytime I turn my head,
    in any direction,
    no matter what I was looking at,
    no matter where i am,
    I catch a glimpse of you

    As I reach out in my sleep,
    for the one who should lie next to me,
    for just one moment,
    in the dead of night,
    I can almost feel you

    Everytime I think back,
    on all the kisses we shared,
    wether sweet and gentle,
    or oh so intimate,
    for just a sliver of time,
    I can almost taste you

    But one thing I know,
    for all that I've said here,
    every sight, taste, scent, touch, or memory,
    doesn't compare in the least,
    because it isn't you




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