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    Author: ThisIsReal
    ASL Info:    22-M-Lost
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 182/194/88
    Words: 249
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 91
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1541



    Description:
       doubt anyone but me has a clue to this tridbit of information, but this is the 600th poem I wrote about or for dani. most of course have been destroyed, and several since this have been written, considering this is somewhere mid 2005, but hey, i really like it.


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    Always in my head
    Always in my heart
    Now that we're back together
    We'll never be apart

    Ever since we met
    my life has been changed
    Until I was found
    I was thought deranged

    Everyday I woke up
    one step closer to death
    Never knowing when
    I'd take my last breath

    Life was a joke
    I never took it for real
    I was living way too fast
    to even try to feel

    You were my wall
    You were my brakes
    The only one
    that knew what it takes
    to get through to me
    Awaken my heart
    and you've been there for me
    since the start

    Hell we have seen
    There we have been
    but the good times are coming
    Though I don't know when

    I've still got alot of growing up to do
    It was you that told me so
    and you were right
    and that's why i had to go

    But I'm back again
    I want you in my life
    Now that I'm man enough
    I want my wife

    All the me I am now
    is my answer to the past
    One more shot is all we need
    this time, it will last

    I was no good back then
    but you were still there
    All of my bullshit
    To you, I was not fair

    But we're together now
    so I can love you the way that I do
    From the brink of destruction
    I came back for you




    Submitted on 2008-11-13 06:58:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was really good. i liked it. i could feel what you felt throughout. joanna
    | Posted on 2008-11-15 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]



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