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    dots Submission Name: Musing on The Muse of Your Wordsdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsMusing on The Muse of Your Wordsdots
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    Musing on The Muse of Your Words

    All the flowers of Epiphany
    I have designed and collected
    The flowing words through ink
    Came to me
    Unbidden and as yet unwritten or encapsulated

    They lay sanguine indistinct
    And are birthed in paper clues
    I do not own their pages
    This is merely the partnership
    Of a Muse

    Some inspiration enters
    From the outside
    A veiling source connect
    Is and is not mine
    And on their fluid heat ride my ballpoints
    Roller coasters of emotions shine

    Gratitude
    As I repeat their typing
    In electrifying fonts
    As I wait for the mutterings
    Tiny voices of humming songs

    No not mine
    Me
    I simply release them
    Words I just speak for them
    I love to see them
    Gather their own brilliance
    And trip their way
    Through other eyes

    Without them my inadequate lips bumble
    And through the dictionary
    My heart catches the stumble
    On the compelling entreaties of beauty

    Belonging in another passage
    Where I hang my thoughts out to air
    They flow their own way through me
    Divulging and deliberating their message





    My voice would be silent but for them
    I am the too quiet and untroubled man
    Yet they race to discover an impression
    Challenge me to write them
    Explain them if I can

    ( At peace am I made conduit
    To the well of all your words
    Singular community of artists and writers
    But one narrative of hundreds upon thousands
    Touched by the impulse
    Of communicating
    “The Word” )

    And only God knows which ( is )
    Any complex sentences definitive
    Any account of experiences riches
    So penned
    By loving its learning descriptive

    So loving penned flows out its emotive







    Submitted on 2008-11-13 17:55:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Without them my inadequate lips bumble
    And through the dictionary
    My heart catches the stumble
    On the compelling entreaties of beauty

    is my favorite line.
    I like how you ended this piece without a period, so it just floats away like that. "Unbidden" is the perfect way to describe certain poems, yeah? Then it's like magic, like the hand writing it is not your hand but someone else's entirely. Touch of divinity, more like.
    | Posted on 2008-11-15 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a nice and sophisticated write. Good topic and done interestingly and well too. The tone felt whimsical which definitely suits the idea of musing that is being addressed. I thought that how you described the words and coming to you and being you but at the same time not you was a very appropriate way of describing the writing process and I think my favorite part was:
    "My voice would be silent but for them
    I am the too quiet and untroubled man
    Yet they race to discover an impression
    Challenge me to write them
    Explain them if I can"
    But "untroubled man"? C'mon I'm sure you are just as plagued with problems as the rest of us are. Any way, I enjoyed it and that it has good merit to be called poetry.
    | Posted on 2008-11-13 00:00:00 | by bkj43 | [ Reply to This ]


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