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    dots Submission Name: Rootsdots

    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 602
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    I am the flower rooted to the ground watching those seeds of love flutter away into the horizon
    Trapped and chained down by my roots encased in dirt...
    Only when the light showers of rain arrive,
    I am able to make my escape through the softened soil...
    and chase after those seeds of love...
    to plant my own flower.

    here is picture http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f310/CrystaPerak/Roots.jpg

    Submitted on 2008-11-14 00:04:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was good. I think you could have written more. You have a great start. Take it and use it. Like in a race, you don't just wait for the other person to catch up do you? I think it was clear and with detail. I like it.
    | Posted on 2008-11-14 00:00:00 | by stormybluerose | [ Reply to This ]

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