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    dots Submission Name: Steppin Stones 2 The Stars ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 729
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    Bytes: 293



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       Hooray for today and for the fullest moon so bright!
    Sending out lunar and sunshine rays of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share


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    dotsSteppin Stones 2 The Stars ~*~dots
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    IN tHE journey
    NOW
    Stepping Stones
    2
    Stars ~*~

    tHE distance
    BEtween
    is
    wIThin

    Not measured
    Nor
    Counted in time X
    Outside reason
    wITin rhyme




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    ||| Comments |||
      That is such a trip. I love the format. I don't get it, so if you wanna explain it awesome......otherwise it was a very cool poem.
    Blessed Be
    Andie
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi ya Tiff... hope you are well and all is hunky dory... really liked this one Tiff... !!!!
    | Posted on 2008-12-01 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      hey and hi its been along time since i hav been on es took along vacation
    hope all is well and i see u havnt lost your skill of writing

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the way you crafted this one, Tiffany. Nature is a joy and so are you! Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I always loved the Moon, and a full moon is spectacular out at the ranch, as the night sky is bright and clear, and full of stars.

    This is an uplifting, cheerful write lovely lady! Hope you have a great weekend!
    | Posted on 2008-11-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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