Description: I've given up so many people
I've held onto so much hatred and anger towards those that I decided I didn't like.
It took my dad dying to know that I can't always have a second chance.
Some things are final.
That scares me.
When I die I want someone to speak at my funeral
Hello World -------------------------------------------
Hello world
This is me
Looking to the sky
Remembering the days when I thought I could fly
Hearing his voice again
Hearing my choice again
I abandoned you
And everyone else
I remember the fights
I remember the fireworks, the sounds, the lights
I miss you
I'm sorry
Letting go
Trying to go on
So cliché Like a sad song
Remember me?
Looking at you like you were the world?
You were
You are
And now I am
I see his smiles
How could you leave me?
Did I not smile like that?
When I hold him and he hugs me
When I leave and he cries
How could you leave me?
How could I leave you?
She wasn't my best friend
That would mean we wouldn't be friends anymore
She was just someone I knew
I was never convinced of that though
I walked away
Silent
Angry
Hateful
Hello world
This is me
I am free
of the burdens
placed upon me
I am open and honest
Caring and kind
I am not the same person
I was behind
all those crimes of aggression
I am new
REINVENTED
it's too late
for him
it's too late
I love you daddy
I always have
Hello Heaven
take him home
with open arms
hold him close
love him
like we all should have
mend that broken man
Remorse
My new talent
Remorse for myself and those around me
You didn't do me wrong
I just didn't agree that it was right
I'm sorry So sorry
Rest in Peace
"I walked away/Silent/Angry/Hatefu/Hello World/This is me..." This is extremely deep and a strong piece. I don't know how to describe it, but somehow it is... darkly whimsical? Hm, no, that's not the word for it... Anyway, it has a distinct feel to it indicating your style.
And of course, the spelling, capitalization, and so on were impeccable, which is rare. Even more rare is when a writer comes up with a vivid, deep "featured" piece. And so you have done.
Omg This is such a great write i think this is a really easy to read well flowing deliver of a story that has the reader namely myself in this instance being swept up in the angst and negative energy and then discover the wonder of new mindsets and positive energy.
We are a product of our environment and with each day as we grow wiser we learn and grow stronger from our experiences... I'm stoked that you have this skill to share this piece with us .
Submission Name: Hello World
