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    dots Submission Name: Let us be.dots
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    Author: Charlie Poppins
    ASL Info:    22, female, England
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 71/85/65
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsLet us be.dots
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    They say the grass is always greener, they say you want what you don't own,
    But I'm fine on my side of the fence, mowing my own lawn,
    Perfection is a disappointment; I'd rather work on 'just not quite',
    It's not like I have any insight, I'm just loving in my own life,
    Nothing's set like concrete; I just like how it sticks to my feet,
    What's so wrong with enjoying the first good thing you meet?


    Im not gonna search in your mirror for problems I don't have,
    I'm not gonna put aside what I've already found
    Its not like I can share it out, and I'm not on guaranteed ground,
    Not gonna act like it doesn't work, or that I see myself in something else,
    Just let me have it, and don't try to grab it,
    Just let us be.









    Submitted on 2008-11-14 23:51:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the philosophy in this! We are all created in Gods image, and are beautiful beings, just put together each of us a little differently! I like the wise philosophical message here that says "be thankful for what you have"! True beauty comes from within!
    | Posted on 2008-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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