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    dots Submission Name: ..::Google Me::.. [Reworked] V2.0dots
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    Author: Timmy S. Edgar
    ASL Info:    36 male Melb, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.53 - 260/190/64
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Joke/Comedy
    Total Views: 219
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1167



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       I have reworked and edited this piece i hope you enjoy

    TSE


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    dots..::Google Me::.. [Reworked] V2.0dots
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    Type my name Into Google; Timmy S. Edgar
    All that's left now to do, is CLiCk 'feeling lucky'
    And with that; you'll find all of my best poetry
    Each one and all are sweet; real nice, not yucky

    You see; I come from love; I scribe these feelings down
    Words do come to me; of you, my thoughts now emerse
    Then I jumble them about to rhyme a poem; just for you
    I express loving feelings, all enveloped in eloquent verse

    For only you in verse; I do so, as to deliver my emotion
    A view; to always make my readers; feel love and smile
    As inside your heart , I'll create a loving warm inner glow
    From within my words our mind's begin loving; undenial

    So Thanks a bunch my beautiful Girl; for being my muse
    And with that, i do hope; that you have truly, enjoyed;
    My poems, My verse and all else that I project, my love
    All posted on Eliteskills, the platform that I've employed



    Timmy S. Edgar © 2008




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      I feel there should be a Mr in front of Timmy S Edgar... like Mr Timmy S Edgar... sounds cool don't you think. I think "google me" is a clever and original write.
    | Posted on 2008-11-17 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is great, but you know, I just got lost at times.

    Great concept. Maybe a 2.1 or 3.0 version is in the making?






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