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    dots Submission Name: Parasite ( The Long Man )dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    dotsParasite ( The Long Man )dots
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    Parasite ( The Long Man )

    Sucking on the teeth
    the succulent hanging meat
    of congenital fortune
    hangs fat on fat big lipped and bloated
    by lack of over exertion

    Slopping a grin of self satisfaction
    the dribble of comfort
    the knowing closed shutter of abuse
    weighs as a mound of flaccid skin
    supported by the working man

    Cream it will be
    before poverty
    all and all without worry
    while swallowed pride fills the belly
    and sweat so sippingly savoured
    the flavour of usury

    All the trappings accompaniments
    shotgun the hunt
    the sport of kings
    the mindless pastimes of the clueless and soulless
    with nothing to do but suck on the meat
    of congenital fortune
    hangs fat on fat bibbed lipped and bloated
    by lack of over exertion






    Submitted on 2008-11-15 17:42:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Reminds me of a line from a comedian whose name now escapes me. "Los Angeles is a big, fat demon cock", or something else to that effect. Guess it's like this in every city, country, whatever, to everyone who's ever had to drop their dignity like a pair of soiled panties and bend over for "the man". Blue collar angst.

    I really like it, especially the lines
    "Cream it will be
    before poverty
    all and all without worry
    while swallowed pride fills the belly
    and sweat so sippingly savoured
    the flavour of usury"
    | Posted on 2008-11-17 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]


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