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    dots Submission Name: I wonderdots
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    Author: teekie
    ASL Info:    18/f/ma
    Elite Ratio:    1.12 - 5/27/21
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI wonderdots
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    I wonder does he think about it more than i do
    I wonder does he know the pain he has put me threw
    I wonder does he care of all the times he made me cry night after night time after time
    I wonder has he ever thought twice before he takes part of my life
    I wonder does he see that what he does is killing me
    I wonder does he know i attempted suicide or slit my wrist at night all because of what he has done to me
    I wonder does he really know the hell he has causes me
    I wonder




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