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    dots Submission Name: Another Way to Godots
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    Author: my shadow
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    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAnother Way to Godots
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    You look out the sunlit window far away
    Thinking of things you might have done
    Wondering what might have been
    Hoping maybe there's yet a chance
    You can find that life you're longing for
    Somewhere beyond the garden's gate

    Safely behind strong locked doors
    You look back across shadowed rooms
    To see the memories of your life
    Standing on the floors
    Hanging on the walls
    Lying in the drawers

    Tonight you rest your head
    On your own pillow in your own bed
    Snug in sleep's welcome embrace
    Dreaming perhaps of what will be tomorrow
    After you pack just one bag
    Of things that don't need you

    And you're on your way




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      Happy Day! Another way 2 go smiles to share ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-08-12 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Its amazing how your words describe my current ...battles. Trying to grasp hope for a new future, something different, something safe. Meanwhile the past is still right in front of you, and in a weird way it's comfortable. Very beautifully written.
    | Posted on 2008-11-18 00:00:00 | by Jessa | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is beautiful and brilliant! Dreaming and wondering about a journey in the future and its outcome, from the safety and security of home and the present!

    Outstanding! Bravo!
    | Posted on 2008-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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