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    Author: rubymoon
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 155/162/91
    Words: 270
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Assignments, assignments
    The never ending workload!
    “Its to help you cope, in the real working world,
    you’ll be working on more then a FEW projects...
    at one time, at any given time”

    Oh, joy! The joy of it
    More WORK, to look forward to!
    “Anyway, whoever said I was interested?
    To know how is it in the REAL working world?
    I know you’re past your prime and not having enough fun...
    I on the other hand, want to enjoy my youth”

    Aurgh! You people have no mercy at all
    You know the future holds more work, and less fun
    and yet, you STILL want to pile all this work on me
    If that is not heartless, what is?
    Tell me that!

    Anyway, fun ranting is still random fun
    BUT it ain’t going to get the assignments done
    Now, back to slaving away on my petty workload
    I’m going to keep a smile on my face
    knowing that your workload is many folds of mine.
    As you’ll have to mark the work of mine and my course mates
    Cheers to you, and good luck
    I know you’ll have a headache when you read our work
    The little mistakes here and there...
    I think you got off the hook easy! Typed and not
    handwritten... you know how our writings are

    Oh yes... you’re not totally in the clear yet
    There is still the final exam... YES!
    That means pages and pages of written bull,
    all looking to squeeze the marks out of you
    in any way possible!

    *gives a feral grin before bending back to work*




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      . This one is flawless. Emotions captured perfectly. I am thinking this is more of a rant than it was meant to be art. Though sometimes the two can be one
    | Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate,

    I feel like Ive read a crock of bull[censored] and now I have to mark it,but Im not gonna,cos thatd be a lot of work

    But I will add it to my faves (BIG THING for me lol)

    I feel good about the world after reading this,even if the future is endless graft,theres also dying to look forward to,that takes a lot of effort lol

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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