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    dots Submission Name: talking to myselfdots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 339/412/257
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 155
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 525



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    dotstalking to myselfdots
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    The words
    they seem to mock me
    with no answers
    they are left forgotten
    no one seems to care
    as they hang their
    as see through as air
    am I talking to myself?
    These walls
    they seem to be closing
    am I slowly going insane
    or is my brain on overdrive
    from loneliness
    from silence?
    I could keep talking
    or learn a lesson
    and leave
    but nothing will ever be the same
    I'll still be talking to myself.




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