Misery

Author: 7makaveli Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 36 /43 /50 Words: 112

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Misery

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They say misery loves company, so where is she? Where is my love to comfort me? Where is my partner to hold me close? Who can I talk to that can take me away, from my misery? Misery cannot love anything It yearns for love back Don't say you won't come back Oh don't say you will Unless you will go only to return Then I can say I attracted you You were attracted to my misery But that won't ever happen you see Because misery is apathy People forget about you, and you forget about them The ones you hold dear, are fading memories Misery hates company

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