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Misery


Author: 7makaveli
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Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Misery



They say misery loves company, so where is she?
Where is my love to comfort me?

Where is my partner to hold me close?
Who can I talk to that can take me away,
from my misery?
Misery cannot love anything
It yearns for love back

Don't say you won't come back
Oh don't say you will
Unless you will go only to return
Then I can say I attracted you
You were attracted to my misery

But that won't ever happen you see
Because misery is apathy
People forget about you, and you forget about them
The ones you hold dear, are fading memories
Misery hates company




Submitted on 2008-11-20 07:02:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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