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Journal 4


Author: KarloZ
ASL Info:    21/male/california
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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This is probably my most poetic journal. Yes, short, I know, but Im a fan of the modernist movement, I guess this fall into that category. In all honesty, its the best thing I've ever written.

I really hope the spacing shows on this thing because, if you've ever studied modernist poetry, you know the position of the lines is probably just as important as the words themselves.

Hope you get it, thanks for reading.


Journal 4



Mood: Tired



Pillars crumble:




I under.




Submitted on 2008-11-20 17:56:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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