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    dots Submission Name: Journal 4dots
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    Author: KarloZ
    ASL Info:    21/male/california
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 5/5/18
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 772
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 127



    Description:
       This is probably my most poetic journal. Yes, short, I know, but Im a fan of the modernist movement, I guess this fall into that category. In all honesty, its the best thing I've ever written.

    I really hope the spacing shows on this thing because, if you've ever studied modernist poetry, you know the position of the lines is probably just as important as the words themselves.

    Hope you get it, thanks for reading.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsJournal 4dots
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    Mood: Tired



    Pillars crumble:




    I under.




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