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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet-A simple prayer by Me Joshua Brooksdots
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    dotsSonnet-A simple prayer by Me Joshua Brooksdots
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    Love me for me
    not what I'll be
    Open up my mind
    help me soon find
    A girl who's real
    and who can feel
    Make her my sun
    and the only one
    She'll be my friend
    there to the end
    She'll be my light
    guiding me thru the night
    She'll be my life
    and hopefully my wife.




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