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    dots Submission Name: Secert Lovedots
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    Author: nastydevil
    ASL Info:    17/male/sault ste maire
    Elite Ratio:    0.94 - 1/5/13
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 174
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1148



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    dotsSecert Lovedots
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    Everyday I sit there quiet
    Looking at the one person who can make me happy
    Can't tell her how I feel
    It wouldn't be the same
    She's to good of a friend
    But, don't the best relationships start as just that?

    I want to be with her more than anything
    She dont see me as the same
    Could I change her mind?
    Would she fall, or just laugh

    It is love, I feel
    Gazing in her eyes,my body melts
    Feeling all warm inside
    Tingling feeling from feet to head
    But I can't tell her
    fear is keeping me from revealing
    I'll just go back in my shell
    Like my love is just a joke
    and keep my life a living hell.

    Even though depression is setting in
    I cant tell her how much I do care
    But to have her by my side
    would be the best thing to happen
    all my problems would just float away

    I wouldn't have to go to heaven
    Because I would be in it,
    with her there is no hell
    with her there is no end
    with her I am whole.




    Submitted on 2008-11-21 01:37:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      If this poem you have entered is fact i think you should descreatly tell her in small favors grardually making them larger. then eventually tell her how you feel i use to be like you and still am.
    | Posted on 2008-11-21 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]



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