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    dots Submission Name: Deep Sorrowdots
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    Author: nastydevil
    ASL Info:    17/male/sault ste maire
    Elite Ratio:    0.94 - 1/5/13
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 157
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    dotsDeep Sorrowdots
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    waiting, wanting, watching
    to be with you
    afraid of what will happen
    will it come true,
    only thing that I really desire
    is to be with you
    and the biggest secert is that I love you
    you need to know,
    how i feel
    if it stays inside
    I will simply die
    I've got to tell you
    you are the girl of my dreams
    totally head over heels,
    and its becomming crazy
    I will tell you
    that I can not live without you

    If you could just hear
    my cries at night for you
    then you would understand
    that I truly do care
    want me and you to become one
    our souls to intertwine

    looking into your eyes
    through ur body
    feeling safe with you
    crying on your shoulder,you on mine
    finally the bliss I've been looking for
    But, I only see it thourgh the key hole
    Its just a vision of what I want
    Its not the truth
    It kills me inside to see you alone,
    with me here waiting for you

    You see right over me
    like im not even there
    stepping on me
    crushing my soul
    Now as I cry myself to sleep,
    dreaming of your face
    us holding hands
    The one time I smile
    I wake up screaming
    Its not reality
    Back to sorrow.




    Submitted on 2008-11-21 02:47:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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