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    dots Submission Name: soft weardots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 654
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 273



    Description:
       ~a man and his laptop~


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    dotssoft weardots
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    binary code
    my love, my mechanism

    synapses lacking
    imaginative response

    the soul of my machine
    is still a lovely being

    regardless of her
    inability to weep

    fondly,
    1101010




    Submitted on 2008-11-21 15:06:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Cute Bill,

    How about

    "binary code
    my love... mechanism"

    just for ambiguities sake. :)

    Dale
    | Posted on 2009-03-21 00:00:00 | by erthona | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe that our success as writers depends on how much information we can find. Not that the raw data is to be written, but the reflection is truly ours.

    You've personified cyberspace which really works, at the other end of our journeys people provide the ideas that inspire us.

    How are you, sir billious? I like the binary code signature, very cool!

    Nan
    | Posted on 2008-11-29 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm sure it's just a phase. I think the problem with most of us is that we expect to be such brilliant artists after experiencing something big. And so we are pressured to write something that stands side by side with that feeling. Not that I'm saying that's your case. I just wanted to vent. Hee hee.

    My love and my mechanism works so well together.

    I don't know if it's deliberate but I'm a bit fond of the fact that this is toned down compared to most of your work. I mean, if the medium really is the message, then there is no better way to write this piece, yes?

    Anyway... happy hunting.
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]


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