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    dots Submission Name: My Beloveddots
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    Author: Sodais
    ASL Info:    24/M/where i am
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 9/7/3
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 482



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    dotsMy Beloveddots
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    my beloved
    how i love thee

    my heart beats slowly
    as your beats fast

    togther they shall combine
    as one finally our hearts colide

    as they form this beat
    not fast not slow

    just perfect
    as we are

    close
    yet far

    my beloved
    listen

    you are the only
    you

    no one else
    just

    you...




    Submitted on 2008-11-22 01:23:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aweee i like this poem. iyts very awesome. like nutella.
    | Posted on 2008-11-25 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      little yunus, this reminds me how much i miss u.
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]
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    great poem i liked it good wording
    shortie
    | Posted on 2006-07-22 | by shortie | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so cute yunus i love this you kno



    fana
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    This was really good to read. There were some gramatical errors here and there, but overall, it was very sweet. What I liked the most about this was that despite the rhyme[able] structure, you didn't rhyme. And that may sound like a stupid favourite thing, but it made this original. Well done.


    Abbas
    | Posted on 2006-07-10 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    yah wannna be smashing pupmkins. dis poem rawks.I like how u made the ending all .... and shyt.good job Yunus.

    Da Grim Reaperessssssss
    | Posted on 2006-07-01 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    Hm..Nicely done. *claps*..Dedicated to me? *blushes* Anywho, great piece. I liked it a lot. *smiles*

    Lucy
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    liking it but you seem to have left out soemthing . i agree with the other i like the structure and vocab using
    kaila
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 | by Kaila Turley | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]

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    enjoyable read....l like the way you have structured your word placement...
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ] [ PM ]
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 00:00:00 | by Sodais | [ Reply to This ]



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