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    dots Submission Name: If my voice worked...dots
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    Author: oolalaoo33
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 6/10/11
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this in My Creative Writing class Junior year. (2006)


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    dotsIf my voice worked...dots
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    I would tell you the words if i could
    if my voice worked i would
    but the words weigh me down
    and i just dont know how
    to get them out.

    i would tell you how you make me smile
    how you make me laugh
    how talking to you is worth my while
    worth every single breath

    yet confusion wraps my heart
    and tightens every day
    this is the part
    that makes me seem to stray

    for what if you dont feel the spark
    that i feel when we talk
    and what if you are in the dark
    that i even feel this way.

    all i know is that i cant deny
    i like you above the rest
    yet so many nights i have cried
    those nights of great distress

    so i want you to know now
    how i truely feel
    this time i dont know how
    but i will tell you what is real

    and although you may hate me
    or may not see me that way
    its better to have tried and not succeed
    than live like this everyday




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